Thanks for all the useful comments everyone, I will make some amendments and post them up soon.

Above that the text could be improved, I don’t know what it is I can’t put my finger on it, maybe try changing the text a little bit fontwise and see how it works out then.

On the Don Weller I’m not sure if that particular font works along with the picture and the theme of ‘jazz’, personally I think it lends it’s self to computers and a more futuristic feel. Lets try get some horizontal names in there too lol.

Good overall effort, really impressed.

Reaffirming the things I said during class, the font on the Tina May design I personally find it a little hard to read.

I like the fact that you have retained the colour for her photograph as it works very well.

Does the image compress down below the golden 20k mark?

The Don Weller banner works well other than the text in the top left, due to the lack of contrast it doesn’t really stand off the page as well as it could.

I do really like how Don is looking at the “live at…” text.

It directs the viewers eyes well.

With regards Craig’s comment, I think that because we have all been given the same brief, the same images, the same tutor and the same time scales in which to produce the banners I feel that it is inevitable that some design ideas will overlap.

Well done.

You could drop just Jazz down underneath the rest of your text.

The design challenges just get better and better wait until you get the Culture Vulture assignment (may be called something different so A9). This assignment so far has been the hardest for me but now my favourite now we know our product.

I really like your banner designs but as you said you wasnt sure about the word ‘Jazz’ I was the same but I think if you try and make the word stand out then I think that will make it look good.